Ok so i made this song using garageband and i was just wanting some people to have a listen and honestly tell me what they think so i can make it better please have a listen. :) thankyou for your time it is REALLY appreciated. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_3Y8vmZSqAU

Hi jwa3003, Thank you for sharing your music. I don't really see how I can comment on how to make your music better as I don't really know what you're trying to achieve... but I would recommend adding more space to the mix and perhaps lowering the main gtr loop in some sections to provide a bit of variety. I'm also hearing clicks in the gtr loop at the end of the song? Will you be adding vocals? Thanks R

Hey, yea thank you this is actually very helpful. I am planning on adding vocals but I have no singer at the moment. And yea those clicks are annoying ae this was a pretty rushed recording so i didn't have much time to sort that out but thank you for bringing it up so i know im not the only one who can notice that lol :). Thank you very much though for taking the time to have a listen it does really mean a lot to me :). I know this probably isn't the right place to be posting this would you have any suggestions on where i could post?